iSnare.com - Free Content Articles Directory
Authors Contents [Advanced Search][Add OpenSearch][Job Search]
Distribute your articles to thousands of article sites for only $2 and below! Read more...

Index  Marketing
 

Common Mistakes That Can Kill Your Web Copy

 
[ Contact the Author] [ Send to a Friend] [ Article Publisher] [Make PDF] [ Print] [ Bookmark & Share]
 
Read our Terms of Service before reprinting this article. The submitter specified above has claimed the rights to this article.
Karon Thackston

Sometimes learning what not to do is as important as learning what to do. Copywriting is no exception. I oftentimes see copy that is well written, but obviously created by an amateur. How do I know? One or more of the following five mistakes was made and that killed the copy… dead.

Once you understand why these mistakes are, in fact, mistakes, you can easily avoid them. It isn't like they are complicated concepts. It just takes someone to bring them to your attention so you can guard against them.

Pull up your site in a browser and follow along. See if you've made any of these mistakes on your site.

#1 - Writing Without Knowing Your Target Audience

This is, without a doubt, the biggest mistake of copywriting and the #1 killer of conversions. Why? I'll answer with a question.

When you write a letter (or email), do you just start writing and decide afterwards who you're going to send the letter to? Of course not! So why, then, do so many people just jump in and start writing website copy without having a clue about who they are writing to? It makes no sense to me.

How can people possibly communicate with their site visitors if they have no idea who they are, what they are looking for, their preferred communication style, what problems they face, how they hope to use the product/service to solve those problems and countless other information? Truth is, you can't.

Take knowing your target customers to the extreme. Find out everything you can about them. Then combine all that info to create an imaginary person (or imaginary people) who fit the profile of your target audience members. You can even name them if you want to. Then - with every sentence - write to that person (or persons).

#2 - Writing Without Knowing the Product/Service

Like it or not, you're a salesperson. That means you have to know all the details of the product or service you're writing about. How else can you convincingly convey the information to prospects who visit the site?

Ask your client for samples of products, use of the services or access to member areas of a site. Using or taking part in what your client is offering to his/her visitors will make a huge difference in the quality and persuasiveness of your copy. Nothing comes across as well as copywriting that has been created from experience.

#3 - Writing About the Company Instead of To the Site Visitor

They don't care. Who? Your site visitors. They don't care about your company. Rather than hear about how long you've been in business and that you're the specialists in this, that or the other thing, they'd rather find out how your product/service can benefit them.

If your home page starts with something like this, you're in trouble: "ABC Company is the specialist in [insert industry here] with over 20 years experience. We provide [fill in the blank] with our extensive knowledge and helpful service. Dedicated to providing the highest quality, we guarantee our work with a 100% money-back promise."

You're we-ing all over yourself! The customer has the money. Don't you think the copy should at least acknowledge him/her at some point? Rather than using we, us and our so much, turn it around.

Talk to your site visitors instead of about the company. Let them know you understand their needs and have answers to their problems. Don't ignore them by talking only about yourself.

#4 - Outlining Features Instead of Benefits or End Results

Features are nice, but benefits and end results make the sale because they clearly explain why the customer will be better off after buying your product or using your service. One of the biggest selling factors in copywriting is the ability to tell the customer what he/she can do with a product or service.

Take a tip from the infomercials. They don't simply tell you that a rotisserie cooker rotates as it cooks a chicken. No! They tell you that this rotisserie cooker can bake a whole, marinated, Italian herb chicken that's juicy, moist and succulent. That the seasonings slowly seep into the meat so you get bite after tender bite of flavorful chicken so good you'll beg for more. Who cares that the thing has a pointed, metal prong that rotates a chicken while it cooks? You're buying it because it can deliver that wonderful whole, marinated, Italian herb chicken!

#5 - Neglecting the Medium

Does it make a difference as to where your copy appears online? Isn't all Web copy the same? The answers are "Yes" and "No." Landing pages are not the same as home pages, which are not the same as catalog pages, which are not the same as sales letters, and so on and so on. Don't neglect to find out the differences between these and the other types of Web copy. They all have special considerations that should be studied before you begin writing.

Now you can add these five "don'ts" to your favorite copywriting checklist. Avoiding these mistakes will give you a better shot at reaching your visitors on their level and converting them into repeat customers.

© 2005 http://www.copywritingcourse.com

Important NoticeDISCLAIMER: All information, content, and data in this article are sole opinions and/or findings of the individual user or organization that registered and submitted this article at Isnare.com without any fee. The article is strictly for educational or entertainment purposes only and should not be used in any way, implemented or applied without consultation from a professional. We at Isnare.com do not, in anyway, contribute or include our own findings, facts and opinions in any articles presented in this site. Publishing this article does not constitute Isnare.com's support or sponsorship for this article. Isnare.com is an article publishing service. Please read our Terms of Service for more information.

Copy not getting results? Let Karon teach you how to write SEO copy that impresses the engines and your visitors at http://www.copywritingcourse.com. Having trouble working keyphrases into your copy? Check out “How To Increase Keyword Saturation (Without Destroying the Flow of Your Copy)” at http://www.copywritingcourse.com/keyword
Article Tags: copy [See Dictionary], site [See Dictionary], writing [See Dictionary]
Got a question about this article? Ask the community!
Article published on August 30, 2005 at Isnare.com
 
Rate this article:

Consistency Is Key In The PPC Conversion Process
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

Let me enlighten you about something you might not have considered Ultimate conversions from pay-per-click (PPC) ads come from a process, not a single event...

My SEO's Good. Now Should I Work On Conversions?
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

© 2007, All Rights Reserved It happens more frequently than you might think People spend a lot of time and money getting their sites ranked highly in the search engines, but give little or no attention to converting their visitors into paying customers...

3 Simple Rules For Creating An Effective USP
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

© 2007, All Rights Reserved You have one, whether you know it or not Everybody does...

Online Shoppers Ask For More Detailed Copywriting
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

by Karon Thackston © 2007, All Rights Reserved I found out quite by chance I noticed a research brief in my inbox entitled, "Bad Web Experience Impacts Brick and Mortar Shopping...

Ebook Review: 73 Ways To Describe A Widget
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

© 2007, All Rights Reserved There I was – stuck, staring at my computer screen and gritting my teeth...

Copywriting Makeover: Value Vs. Vision - Part 1 Of 2
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

There's no doubt Wholesalers USA knows their customers...

Copywriting Makeover: Value Vs. Vision - Part 2 Of 2
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

In Part 1 of this series, we discovered that explaining the value your products offer is only one part of the copywriting process...

As-Is Or Individually - What's The Best Use Of Keyphrases?
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

There has been a debate about the use of keywords for years Many SEO copywriters will tell you that using keyphrases in their entirety is the best practice for getting high rankings...

Copywriting Makeover: It's What You Say And How You Say It, Part 1 Of 2
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

The old cliché is wrong All our lives we've heard, "It's not what you say, but how you say it...

Copywriting Makeover: It's What You Say And How You Say It, Part 2 Of 2
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

In Part 1 of this series, I introduced you to Announce It, an online candy-bar-wrapper manufacturer that was seeking professional help with their search engine copywriting...

How To Write Little Tiny Adwords Ads That Bring Giant-sized Profits
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

It seems to be a phenomenon You try AdWords, your ad gets “disapproved” by the powers that be at Google, you count your losses and give up...

Copywriting Makeover: Facts vs. Fantasy (Part 2 Of 2)
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

In Part 1 of this article series (found here: http://wwwmarketingwords...

Copywriting Makeover: Facts vs. Fantasy (Part 1 Of 2)
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

Time for a pop quiz Name three products that sell better when a facts-based approach to copy is taken...

Opening Sentences That Close The Sale
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

© 2006 It's one of the best pieces of copywriting advice I've ever been given "As often as possible, start your paragraphs with sentences that hook readers and drive them deeper into the copy...

Making It Easy For Customers To Choose You
Submitted by: Karon Thackston

Isn't it frustrating All you need is a new computer desk (or whatever you may be currently shopping for), but you can't make a decision you're comfortable with...

Local Business Marketing – 10 Tools to Include in Your Online Marketing Plan Toolkit
Submitted by: Vicki Fjellner

Local business marketing online is an essential piece of your local business’s profit model, as it will enable you to be successful today and for years to come...

Article Marketing- Generate Free MLM Leads, Embrace Article Writing!
Submitted by: SANDRA ESSEX

Article marketing can be the key to your success in your present MLM company I assume you’re reading this piece because you’re a network marketer...

Tip For Your Internet Marketing Success
Submitted by: Bob Sherman

An important Internet marketing tip everyone ought to use is just to optimize your web site for the search engines...

Five Ideas To Get Advertising-Free
Submitted by: Diana White

When you enter to the Web arena as affiliate marketer, you will soonest realize that Google Adwords is not only easily approached and offers good earnings, but you cannot pay for something inexpensive but not free, which is more than you have in hands...

Make Money Off YouTube, The Smart Way
Submitted by: William Randall

When Google bought YouTube for $16 billion, a lot of people said they'd never make their investment back...

Crowdsourcing: Three Ways to Find a Great New Company or Product Name Free or at Low Cost
Submitted by: Marcia Yudkin

Increasingly popular, "crowdsourcing" involves inviting a large number of people to perform a task, with a prize promised to the person or team whose work is selected as the winner...

Want a Catchy Company Slogan or Tag Line? Avoid These Five Tragic Mistakes
Submitted by: Marcia Yudkin

A tag line is the little slogan that follows a business name on a web site, in ads, on company stationery and elsewhere...

Better Business Naming: Does Your Proposed New Company Name Open the Door to Ridicule?
Submitted by: Marcia Yudkin

People who intensely dislike your company or feel wronged by you will always find some way to complain...

What Research Says About Selecting the Best Business Name For Your Company
Submitted by: Marcia Yudkin

High-priced branding consultants who huddle together for months to concoct a new company name would like the public to think that effective naming involves secrets revealed only to those who earned a Ph...

How to Submit a Review to an Article Directory
Submitted by: M Wallace

Article marketers have been very creative with the type of articles they submit to publishers and article directories...

How to Spam Facebook Like a Professional
Submitted by: Melissa Kay

• Collect consumers’ contact details easily with "You’ve won a free camera" ad • Design online quizzes to collect phone numbers and to achieve maximum reach • Show personal details on landing pages to increase conversion • Earn high profits by using cloaking method Have you ever wondered how much profit online scammers make on Facebook...

One Article Marketer's Review of Content Crooner
Submitted by: M Wallace

People who market a website, product or service with articles are most commonly referred to as "article marketers...

Choosing the Right PPC Keywords Can Make or Break Your MLM PPC Campaign Success
Submitted by: SANDRA ESSEX

A good PPC keywords campaign can make or break the success of your MLM or Online internet business When you are starting a new pay per click (PPC) ad campaign, one important element to your financial goal is to first prepare a long list of keywords and phrases that you can target for your niche market...

ESelling: Sellign Your Cars Online in an EMarket
Submitted by: Pete J Ridgard

It has been a very long time since I last went shopping for a car; so long in fact that I have noticed that the whole nature of car shopping has changed irrevocably...

Top Tips on How to Promote and Market Your Own Book
Submitted by: Tony Mandarich

Marketing is often not an author’s area of expertise, but it does not mean an author is incapable of learning how to successfully market a book...

Isnare.com Footer Divider

© 2004-2009. Isnare Free Articles - An Isnare Online Technologies Free Articles Project. All Rights Reserved.   Privacy Policy